The graph below shows the wheat exported from three different regions between 1985 and 1990

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The graph below shows the wheat exported from three different regions between 1985 and 1990.

The line graph indicates the amount of wheat which three different regions exported from 1985 to 1990.

Overall, the wheat exports from Canada almost did no change while the figure of other two regions saw significant changes. In particular, an upward trend was observed in the figure of European Community and a downward trend was witnessed in Australia.

As regard the first, the amount of wheat exported from Canada was nearly 20,000,000 tonnes. There was some widely fluctuations in five years but in between 1986 and 1988, the figure increased considerably to the highest point with 25,000,000 tonnes. After that, it was still around 20,000,000 tonnes in 1990.

Besides, in 1985, the figures were respectively 15,000,000 tonnes and about 17,000,000 tonnes in Australia and Europe Community. The former rose above 15,000,000 tonnes in 1986 before declining gradually to roughly 10,000,000 tonnes, the lowest of the wheat exports in three regions. By contrast, the later decreased by around 5,000,000 tonnes in 1986 then elevated steadily, with an estimated approximately above 20,000,000 tones.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d approximately above 20,000,000 tones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, still, then, while, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49122807018 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69865141677 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5315056869 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179291583027 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116264847939 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167856099296 0.0843802449381 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202800924457 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.211357894132 0.0819641961636 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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