The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line chart indicates the rate of citizen who are 65 years old and over from 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Overall, the proportion of population age 65 and over in three countries had a significant increase over 100 years. In particular, the figure of Japan was the lowest in 1940 and reached the highest point after 100 years. Meanwhile, the figure in USA and Sweden also increased substantially but were not more pronounced than the figure in Japan.
As regard the first, the population age 65 and over in Japan was the lowest with an estimated five percent in 1940, and decline slightly to about four percent until after 1980. However, the figure saw a massive rise which was five percent, ten percent and 25% in 2002, 2025 and 2027, respectively. In 2040, the proportion of Japan peaked at 27%, the highest of three figures.
Besides, other countries also elevated between 1940 and 2040. In 1940, it was approximately seven percent and ten percent with the rate of Sweden and USA, respectively. The figure of two countries has similarly increases, all are moderate, with about 15% in 1982. After that, the proportion of Sweden fluctuated widely before reaching 25% in 2040. There was a slight decrease in the figure of USA from 1982 to 2020 then increased fast by around 10% in 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ine chart indicates the rate of citizen who are 65 years old and over from 1940 and 204...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, similarly, so, then, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82743362832 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57847694331 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8042512737 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9166666667 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302499992665 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119271123164 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113578250582 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195082482013 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378092141798 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.