People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
People need to work as they grow. Cash is the most crucial reason for people to work, but there are other purposes for them to work, such as social position and contribution to society. I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, since people have contracted to each other, they want to consider as a distinctive individual with high prestige. To be more specific, people are trying to play a pivotal role in society, by doing particular jobs like an engineer in a great firm or a doctor in the biggest hospital in the city. For example, consider a football player as an example, he has had a hard exercise to become a member of a professional team. Most football players prefer to join a famous team with a lot of supporters rather than just be a part of an ordinary team even with a high salary. For some people being prosperous in work and enjoy of career is a matter of life and death. They do not do works in which they do not like that.
Furthermore, contributing to society is another reason as an interesting target for people to work. Society needs members with different skills to go ahead. People's needs for the various career are raising as society developed. To be more specific, some individuals choose to attend university because they think this is the best way for them to be useful in society. people think about how they can help society to be a better place for living, so they select their future business and attempt to obtain related skills and abilities to be successful in that career. For example, different careers like plumber, carpenter, engineer, etc, should have a contribution to done a building. Somebody needs a home, many people with different skills need to answer this demand and build a house.
In conclusion, people do the job not just to gain money, other reasons make them work. Social members work to be considered worthy and to contribute to civilization.
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- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?“It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet.” Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
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- The government is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the government should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rthy and to contribute to civilization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6884272997 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63982238474 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3948724466 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7777777778 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297545225287 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110499344406 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934509229822 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220162643291 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567040584345 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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