People work because they need money to live, what are some other reasons that people work?
Discuss one or more of these reasons, use specific examples and details to support your answer.
In today's competitive world,if one wants to stand out different from others;it is important to work.People recognise you by your work more than anything else.To live better life and to fulfill certain needs,money plays an important role.
There are many reasons that people want to occupy themselves in one or the other way.No work is big or small as far as you are enjoying it.The demand for education has increased.Simultaneoulsy,needs as well.Younger generation do not like to be dependent on their parents for their requirements.Be it clothes,gadgets,going out or paying fees stc.This is the reason few of them start working side by side along with their studies.Also,there are many who wants to help their parents as well.It may not be possible in certain cases if there are 4-5 members and only one member is working.
Also,if a person is taking higher education and after that,you don't utilise,then there is no point of spending a time and money behind it.This is also one of the reason make people believing in work.
Also,work makes you understand what is happening around you.How to cope up with certain situations and how to deal with different kind of people.
For example,if in a family,both parents are working,kids will understand situation and they will be an independent individual who will not only help themselves, but others also in future.
Many women have become aware about their particular rights.It becomes easy for them to deal its complexity and make correct use of it if they are working.
In conclusion,apart from earning money,the prime reason of working is to mark a different place in a society and for betterment of self and others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38533541437 2.67179642975 127% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.307976943 48.9658058833 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.571428571 100.406767564 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2857142857 20.6045352989 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 5.45110844103 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22700348026 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105030183735 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584510903842 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105030183735 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584510903842 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 11.7677419355 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.