with the increase in global warming, some may suggest that human race should move to other planets,while others might opine to take measures for the sustenance of or mother Earth. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
It is clear that due to various human activities,environment is getting polluted and has an adverse impact on civilization and its surroundings. this has led to some serious issues like global warming.To make the earth worth living,it would be better to restrict the harmful activities,rather than taking an option of other planets.In my opinion,it would be better to take initiatives to save mother earth.
First,As a human or an individual,we always think about constant growth.To become successful and better than others,humankind always run behind a competition.For example,combustion of fuel and increase in number of plastic waste casuing harmful effect on a nature which ultimately results in global warming.
Also,there is advancement in space traveling,that includes few experiments and Lunar mission would make it impossible to abandon the earth and start living on other planets.Rising sea levels and increase in number of pollutions has mad the situation worst.The condition of mother earth is getting deteriorated over the period of time.Other factors include inability to dispose of garbage in a proper manner.This is one of the major cause to make the global warming at its peak.
To ponder,disciplined behaviour of human beings towards the earth can rescue our planet from extinction.Also,use of plastic bags,bottles,containers should be banned completely. Alternate solution can include recycling of waste materails.The tones of plastic floated in the water bodies damage them and this ultimately effect an environment.
To conclude appropriate measures should be taken in the benifit of nature by humans.The scale of potential impact is uncertain so utmost care should be taken to save next generation and environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67557251908 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.71507393898 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.486244778 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.428571429 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4285714286 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169661368178 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671406906438 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045666834962 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816952832251 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326302181529 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 50.2224549098 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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