Should healthcare be funded totally by the government for every one?
Nowadays, the question of whether healthcare should be financed by the government or not has been receiving a great deal of public attention. In my opinion, individuals and the government should be jointly responsible for this area.
There are some compelling reasons why medical care should be totally financed by government. First, since many patients, especially those coming from impoverished families, fail to pay for the medical fees, it is imperative to aid them by financial support. In fact, a number of fees such as medication, treatment, medical services are truly exorbitant, which implies that the support of the government will save human lives. Second, by funding medical care costs, governments can fulfill the responsibility of its citizens. This means that citizens have paid taxes to national budget, and thus they are entitled for basic services including public health.
Nevertheless, the disadvantages of this policy are obvious to some extent. First, if government subsidizes all the costs of medical treatment, it is apparent that it is unfair for those hard-working and well-hearted citizens. In fact, various diseases can be attributed to bad habits such as drinking and smoking. Therefore, they are more likely to take the free healthcare system for granted and overexploit it, so they do not take responsibility for their health. In addition, by fully funding the health service fees, it will put a heavy burden on state budget. In reality, the government has a whole host of fields to care such as education, politics, economy, and so forth, which leads to the depletion of the national fund.
In conclusion, we cannot deny that both sides are well-grounded. By considering all the pros and cons of this trend, governments should draw the best policy for its citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
Nowadays, the question of whether healthcare should be financed by the go...
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Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir health. In addition, by fully funding the health service fees, it will put a h...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to the depletion of the national fund. In conclusion, we cannot deny that both si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23875432526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96351783354 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2061722825 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313022873224 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962855226476 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743815989197 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200067414779 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745680936215 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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