Do you agree or disagree? Because many problems can now be solved by people themselves and their family, help from government is no longer necessary.
People solve their problems in several ways. They used the ways to ask their family, conduct by the government, and clear themselves. However, it is so controversial for people to choose the government for their concerns. Therefore, effective solutions are what they ask themselves and their family. In my view, I strongly agree with the idea because people exploit the past-mistake from their family, earn logical thinking by solving themselves, and government cannot clear specific problems for people.
To begin with, the family gives advice to people through their past experiences. Some people mistake that they choose the ways of mind-set for their goals. Moreover, they misunderstand the usages to spend their money gamble. From these experiences, people are able to exploit that their family finds the solutions for their problems from their past time.
Secondly, people are able to improve their logical thinking by solving their problems. People do not an effort to think about themselves when they need the government to find solutions for their problems. Therefore, their brain will be gradually down to worse, also their diverse ideas will be limited. However, their limited ideas are going to more splendid and logical when they conduct how to find solutions to their concerns themselves.
Finally, the government does not have the exact solutions for the troubles of each people. Various people have their concerns about their life such as their family, diets, and how to take care of their grandparents and so on. It is so significant time for the government to achieve the answers for each people who have worried. Moreover, they often do not solve exactly what they hold their head. Therefore, people should use the opportunities of their family or friends to ask about their bothers.
To sum up, the government is no longer necessary to find a solution for people disturbed by their problems. I surely believe that people can exploit the mistake made by their family and themselves, establish logical thinking skill by themselves, and the government does not have the stages for each people who concern about their problems to correct exactly answers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...ly gives advice to people through their past experiences. Some people mistake that they choose t...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...solutions for their problems from their past time. Secondly, people are able to improv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21937321937 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58220894218 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447293447293 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8605004153 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314027230343 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12254177876 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063865048446 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21125050603 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299103010125 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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