Do you agree or disagree? It is important for people to watch and read news presented by other who hold different views than others hold similar views.
Some types of news establish the characters of people. This news divide one presented different views and others made similar views. It is so controvertible for people that either one or other is significant. In my view, the news holds different points to create learning opportunities from a different life, open mind, less bias for people.
To begin with, there are many chances for people to touch different life by reading and watching the news represented another view. People are able to see various countries when they watch the news. Therefore, they can notice different customs of the habitats by each country. For instance, one of the university students watches the news about Japanese television program. In this new, almost all Japanese people are barefoot in their house. Therefore, he was amazed by this custom because people who live in his country ware shoes in their house. From this experience, he has the places that he earns new knowledge.
Secondly, the news selected diverse points to replenish the open minds of people. In news, people are able to listen and see that some politicians criticize other politicians. As a result, their mind will be clearer than people who see the news hold same contexts. Take myself as an example, my mindset could be clear since I watched the news made by several sources because the news held terrible issues such as murder, traffic accidents, and complaints by politicians, and so on. Thus, I was able to create open minds for other people.
Finally, people who watch the news embraced different contents ease their bias. From the news, news reporters often use many genres of scoops such as trance gender, hard criticism, and handicapped people, and so on. For example, one of the news embraces the handicapped people as today’s topics. This news show people how handicapped people simply live in the same society compared our life. Hence, people are able to understand the life of handicapped people and take care of them when they encounter the street, restaurants, and public transportations.
To sum up, I surely believe that it is significant for people to choose the news hold different topics. People can create opportunities to learn different life, set an open mind, and diminish their bias.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-04-27 | akimasa7887 | 71 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'divides'.
Suggestion: divides
...ish the characters of people. This news divide one presented different views and other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as for, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05053191489 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64121187521 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51329787234 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5893266948 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5652173913 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.347826087 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91304347826 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348333779064 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11122486981 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801851424404 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213414322235 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074780301423 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.