Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is clear that music is instrumental in everyday life due to its benefits. While some opinion think that music a good approach to get rid of cultural and age gaps. Although I partly agree with this point of view for some reasons, I think that music still is an outstanding topic debated in some cases.
On the one hand, it is obvious that music undoubtedly is a promised mean to share different characteristics between cultures and ages. In terms of cultures, most nations express their own artistic and cultural qualities through folk or popular songs. Consequently, scholars and visitors as well can have a good grasp of understanding of other cultures by immersing into songs that are popular in these nations. Furthermore, seniors may deeply understand youngsters by listening to contemporary hit songs and vice versa. For example, young generations nowadays can somehow relate their parents or grandparents by enjoying some songs which were composed during the wars.
On the other hand, although music has many positive influences, it probably results in declining in conversations among people for some reasons. In case parties have a clash of religions, songs which their counterparts are usually sung in ritual activities can lead to combats or further negative behaviours if they are forced to listen. Another reason, some songs of ancient generations sometimes propagate out-of-date opinions, and therefore, it is too hard to modern youngsters can accept them. Today societies have grown accustomed to the gender equality thanks to many campaigns that have carried out all over the world, so songs that promote female biases can lead to serious tensions.
In conclusion, while it is clear that people can have better relationships thanks to music, I believe that music also makes people reach to a deadlock in some certain occasions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21140939597 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8443096338 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620805369128 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2685387064 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20710288733 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733688654143 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729978768355 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139223054627 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739502403322 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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