Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
It is quiet common belief that free time is relaxing period there should be no mental activity.whereas few people feel that one should engage himself in some interesting motions.Although,its a matter of fact that individuals have their own best loved choice in what ways they are feasible to rescue themselves from hectic routine.
Generally, there are two diverge avenues one should give himself rest physically and mentally to distract himself from mental exercise.on the other hand some expect that this intermission should be recreative.
In bygone years, masses spend very simple life ,they spend pleasure and quality time with their loved ones.They had less stress and good health as well.
Now a days having too much busy life makes a men just like machine.He works day and night for his social needs and securities.He could not have even enough time for his family friends and also for self analysis.whenever he take this pause his first priority is to calm and quiet environment. On the flip side people prefer to do some interesting games, engage themselves in proactive hobbies.it refreshen their mind and these venture give them feel more pleasure as compared to other phenomenon.
In my opinion , it could be a matter of choices but i suggest that people who woks in close enivronment just like office work they have to do some games and venture while other who are in field work must took rest without enganging themselves outing and having fun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, whereas, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02868852459 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70086909671 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651639344262 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9455771698 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.5 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.6666666667 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162646894294 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781923222838 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396984803984 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794470191434 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383668593322 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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