You have recently moved to a different house Write a letter to an English speaking friend In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Sarah,
I remember the last time that we had visited each other in the Rose coffee cafe. Both of us had got tired from the vicissitudes of life, and we weren’t in decent financial conditions.
I had said that my apartment was very old and the cloakroom moulds were always bothering me. However, I could remove and control them by vinegar and detergents. Unfortunately, one day I opened my archive clothes closet for donating some clothes to charities, it was unbelievable that my wardrobe was full of moulds and insects and larva. Very unpleasant smell made me mad on that moment. Therefore, I gathered all of my essentials and left the home.
By talking to some of my near friends and my boss, I could borrow money to live in new apartment. Of course, this new one is far from my workplace and city center but I love it. It has approximately a great terrace that I make a miniature garden in it and I prepare a set of seats and table for my relaxing times.
It is a small apartment but well designed, and I think we can have enjoyable moments beside each other at least for a cup of coffee in my terrace. I am eagerly waiting for your response.
With love,
Sheyda
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, at least, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 5.60731707317 696% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5787037037 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65444973489 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.513624687 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0769230769 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0467997920166 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0166976827384 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245272525002 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0312668658247 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251137337492 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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