Many People Think That Happiness Relies On The Responsibility Of Individuals Others Think It Is Affected By Other Factors
Being happy is key to success and it is in our hands to be joys, as majority crowd thinks we on our own held responsible for the same. However, some individuals have different opine and believe not only the individual alone but also the environment and other factors equally responsible for deciding the happiness we experience. I am in strong consideration that the external factor plays an important role in one's happiness.
For a person what is happiness? It is a state of mind which relieves him from stress and anxiety. To achieve this state of mind human beings must have the ability to control their emotion. To do so there are various ways that help us to concur such as Yogas, meditation, exercise. These all teach to overpower self emotions, to achieve a state of happiness. If we think positively, we find happiness in everything around and it is derived by inner satisfaction.
While some individuals consider external factors affect their happiness. Every person has one or the other dream to fulfill such as a good job, big house, luxurious cars. A feeling of satisfaction arrives when all these get achieved. For some folk’s great deal while shopping makes them happy and if someone got a better deal than them, it immediately reduces the amount of fun they enjoyed while doing it. Weather plays an important role in it. To exemplify, a nice and pleasant wether light up the mood feels joyful. On the other hand, Extreme hot or cold weather makes the person tired.
In conclusion, although many people think that happiness can be solely achieved without considering other factors, it cannot be denied that a person cannot be happy if externally everything is going against his expectations
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...or cold weather makes the person tired. In conclusion, although many people thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71999685248 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4112935771 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1176470588 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281960552816 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670367951047 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756079417539 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163667071449 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074573086 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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