You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter:
• Say how you feel about his performance
• Give details of your musical activities
• Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Mr. James,
I am writing to express my feeling share regarding your musical performance at the Town Hall last on Friday evening. I truly fan your song since 2002 when I was a college student. But unfortunately, before I didn’t attend your live concert. Your singing style and performance was incredible and vivid that why I am now more fan.
My subject is music and I am dramatist for the last four years. I have a lot of award as on dramatist. I was a member of Indian a band and recently I joined a local band there.
I would explain about your dramatist who was not focusing properly with live music otherwise, all are outstanding. If you wish, I will get direction and how-to development as well.
You have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me via my cell number at 01700000.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Zahid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...fore I didn’t attend your live concert. Your singing style and performance was incre...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun award seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of awards'.
Suggestion: a lot of awards
...amatist for the last four years. I have a lot of award as on dramatist. I was a member of Indi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...recently I joined a local band there. I would explain about your dramatist who ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69811320755 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75704218228 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698113207547 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8525947225 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.25 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273976208219 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860680459339 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558638819089 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136028326855 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708276760068 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.