Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
– explain why you changed jobs
– describe your new job
– tell him/her your other news
Dear Jot,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Well, I am writing this to let you know that I have recently my job.
As you know, I was working as a software engineer for the last 3 years in the TCS Company. I know, I told you that I am very happy with my position in the company and I was waiting for the promotion from the last 1 years but my manager has given a promotion to his brother-in-law instead of me.
Fortunately, I was approached by the manager of Trivago Company they gave me to offer the position of branch manager for their Toronto Branch. Firstly, I was not willing to accept but later on, I told me about the salary package and other benefits such as accommodation, fuel price will be accommodated by the company.
Well, after joining as a manager, I do not regret my design of quitting my earlier job. Nonetheless, responsibilities have increased with the position but my team is well equipped with top class web designers. I try to maintain a friendly environment in my office because I do not want my team should face the same problem which I faced earlier.
I forgot to tell you that, I have a new puppy and name it timsy, however, my mother does not like to have a dog. My sister is going to graduate next month and we have decided to throw a party and I hope to see you at the party.
I look forward to your letter, sharing your life experiences and some recent event.
Yours Truly,
Kinu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31481481481 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6022597545 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5038871253 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2142857143 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15662471638 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665499034565 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705076501293 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880353772653 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841944796309 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.