The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarise the information by seleting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the total of carbon dioxide which was released by each individual in four countries given from 1967 to 2007.
Overall, as can be seen from the graph there was an upward trend in the amount of CO2 produced per person in Italy and Portugal while that for the firgure in the United Kingdom and Sweden witnessed a downward trend.
In 1967, the amount of CO2 was discharged by each person in Portugal just over 1 metric tones, but in the following year 1997 it was increased significantly to 4 metric tones each person. The average of CO2 released by people in Portugal rose remarkably in 1997, then more sharply in the next 20 years. From 1967 to 1977, the firgure for CO2 emitted per person in Italia went up significantly, growing slightly in the next 20 years and leveling out between 1997 and 2007.
In contrast, from 1967 to 1977, the average of CO2 released by each individual in the United Kingdom almost stabled by over 10 metric tones but then in the follwinng 30 years it saw a downward noticeably from 10 metric tones to nearly 8 metric tones. From 1967, there was a increase about 2 metric tones higher to 1977 in the firgure of CO2 produced by Swedish people, Then, in the next 30 years the amount dipped dramatically from approximately 11 metric tones to nearly 6 metric tones in Sweden.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60504201681 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48591825346 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483193277311 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7308308728 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.571428571 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1948658159 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109145471978 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449466081556 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139609232259 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456983346646 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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