You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Task: Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like, and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to book the hotel for a long weekend and also want to enquire about certain things about the hotel before confirming the booking.
Actually, cousin is about to shift to Canada in a few days hence, we have planned a family trip together to spend some time and gave her this surprise. I want to book the hotel from 7 May 2020 to 11 May 2020 and we will be arriving around 2:30 pm. We will the hotel on Monday at 11:00 am.
We need four duplex bedrooms equipped with air-conditioning, television and also a big bathtub in the bathroom. We will be eight in number that means four newly married couples. I have checked the rooms online and I was very impressed by reviews of the duplex rooms. I would like to enquire how much it cost for this weekend and either meal are included or not.
I would also like to know what kinds of activities are available in the hotel. What are the most interesting places to visit? What kind of food is famous over there? Please send me details on kjot59@gmail.com.
I look forward to your immediate reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and also a big bathtub in the bathroom. We will be eight in number that means four...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: eight
...big bathtub in the bathroom. We will be eight in number that means four newly married couples. ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d and either meal are included or not. I would also like to know what kinds of a...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your immediate reply. Yours Faithfully, Jot
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, if, look, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4776119403 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52279526088 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8459025497 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2857142857 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230663809516 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686654417625 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053914655882 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103201637694 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371231800301 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.