You have recently moved to a different house/apartment. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
– Explain why you have moved
– Describe the new house/apartment
– Invite him/her to pay you a visit.
Dear Jot,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this to let you know that I have moved to a new house.
I know you will be curious to know the reason of my shifting. Well, I would like to tell you that last year, out of curiosity I appeared in the government bank clerical exam, and fortunately, I have cleared it. I got a job at the Toronto Union Bank. The accommodation is allotted by the bank and it is 10 minutes ride from the downtown and bank.
It is a two-bedroom set with an open kitchen. The rooms are equipped with air-conditioning and heater and both have attached bathrooms. There is a big adjoining balcony with a resting chair to enjoy the city view and greenery. It also has one big living room where one sofa set has bet placed, the LCD is hanged on the wall of the room and there is one round dining table in the right corner with 4 chairs placed near the kitchen.
I know you are quite occupied, even though I would like to ask you to visit my apartment once because it has been a long time to see you. If you are free this weekend just let me know we can have a meeting and will spend some quality time together. I will look forward to your reply.
Yours Truly,
Kinu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...now that I have moved to a new house. I know you will be curious to know the re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16033755274 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31880246654 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0866801514 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7333333333 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253860452511 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815714672217 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819004990068 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164194219211 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118969886242 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.