There are many animals species in the world. Some people think we should for back animals from dying out, while others believe we should spend more time on problem of human beings. Discuss both sides and give you opinion.
Earth comprises plants, animals, and humans. Each is an essential part of the ecosystem. humans are considered to be intelligent species amongst all. Some individuals believe as we being the smartest of all living creatures it's our responsibility to protect the endangered animals. However, the rest of the crowd think emphasizing more in problems related to mankind is crucial. I will explain both reasons in the following essay but personally, I favour saving jeopardized animal species from extinction.
Animals are equally as important as human beings. Saving them is our duty as a part of this ecosystem. If We neglect towards this duty, it will lead to ecological imbalance. Many rare species will be extinct if there is disturbance in the food chain and this happens due to deforestation activity to fulfill the need of a growing population for space to live. This will lead to numerous diseases and natural disasters. Animals are even vital element for medical research as several studies are conducted on these towards finding cures for dreadful diseases. Scientists perform various experiments with the help of these animals as it act as a study model for human illness. Hence, it is of great importance to preserve animals from dying out.
On the other hand, the remaining crowd thinks instead of wasting all these efforts and money on animals there are more important problems of humankind that need to be addressed. This is so because in today's world there are so many complications, we are facing such as drought, malnutrition, unemployment, terrorism etcetera.
To conclude, focusing on animal extinction should be given more value as once they are extinct this situation cannot be reversed whereas human issues can still be handled gradually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Humans
... is an essential part of the ecosystem. humans are considered to be intelligent specie...
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...ng the smartest of all living creatures its our responsibility to protect the endan...
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...ardized animal species from extinction. Animals are equally as important as huma...
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Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...ecies from extinction. Animals are equally as important as human beings. Saving them ...
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...umerous diseases and natural disasters. Animals are even vital element for medic...
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...tion, unemployment, terrorism etcetera. To conclude, focusing on animal extincti...
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...issues can still be handled gradually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, whereas, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21754385965 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85225391859 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4924411411 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4705882353 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324521380717 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850867133676 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555548530068 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179560261066 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170306086003 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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