The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television
order to decrease the level of violent crime in society. To what extent do you agree
or disagree?
With the huge growth in film, video and online content, and in how and where we can watch and use it, it is becoming more important than ever to provide the audience, especially children with the guidance to help them choose what’s right for them and avoid what’s not. Some people argue that such work need to be done through the government by decreasing the amount of violence in the plots in order to eliminate the violent crime in society. However, from my perspective, it is useless and meaningless for the government to take such measures.
To begin with. the level of violent crime in society is influenced by multiple factors, the content in movies and television is not the only driver. Based on social science studies, violent crime is positively related with the unemployment rate, the fabric of society, the legal system and the average education level. In other words, even if a government control the amount of violence in films, while leave these aspects weakly governaned, the violent crime rate will still be high. Therefore, it is less functioned by decreasing the violence shots in video to reduce violent crime.
Furthermore, numerous crude and bloody plots are developed from the reality, such as the war and other historical events. The arts work, documentary for example, is the precious record of the history, which is useful for us to learn the lesson from past and meaningful for our next generation to understand the current age. Although this content may be violent, they should not be removed.
In fact, compared with the government screening each piece of work and directly cut the content, there are more effective and efficient ways to regulate the substance of entertainment industry. For instance, Netflix has been given the official green light from Britain’s independent film regulatory agency to start setting its own age ratings for its films and television series. In this way, the government relocate its authority to the company itself, not only providing proper guidance to audience but also flourishing the industry.
In conclusion, the content in films or TV shows should be properly guided, but not controlled and determined by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... take such measures. To begin with. the level of violent crime in society is in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 3.97073170732 504% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 965.302439024 192% => OK
No of words: 361.0 196.424390244 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13296398892 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69111826952 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 106.607317073 201% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592797783934 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 283.868780488 200% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9166087158 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.533333333 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.23603664747 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26670206162 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848467045188 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743815099011 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135202836262 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889288531347 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 40.7170731707 226% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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