Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
1. Apologize for damaging the product.
2. Explain what happened
3. Say how are you going to fix the issue.
Dear Sarah,
Sorry, it’s taken me so long to write to you but at last, I put pen to paper to explain why I haven’t returned that Camera I borrowed from you.
To be honest, I’ve been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up that I damaged the camera accidentally. I know how important that camera is to you as it was passed down from your late father.
What happened is that, I went to Jadayu Rock Park with my family and we were having fun and capturing beautiful memories through the camera, in between a boy came from nowhere, hit me so hard that I lost my control and fell down on a rock along with the camera. During that misfortune event, the camera’s body got damaged.
I 've spoken to the authorized Canon dealer and agreed on the replacement of the body without affecting its functionality. So I've sent the camera away to be repaired. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back next week and then I'll send it on to you.
Again, I’m extremely sorry for the delay in telling you and apologize for the erratic incident that occurred. I hope you can forgive me.
Best Wishes
Ann Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... What happened is that, I went to Jadayu Rock Park with my family and we were hav...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...without affecting its functionality. So Ive sent the camera away to be repaired. An...
^^^
Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...w when I get it back next week and then Ill send it on to you. Again, I’m extrem...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36279069767 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40584289663 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655813953488 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8505198796 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1666666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233173696741 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770609941433 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598715859005 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132086649356 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710590138921 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.