Your local council is considering closing a local sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the council explaining:
1. Give details as to how you, your family or friends utilize this center
2. Explain why the center is important for the local community
3. Describe the possible effects on the local community if the center closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
This well-considered letter regards your erroneous thought towards shutting the doors of our regional sports and leisure facility.
First, this gym must remain open for the members of my family who reside as longstanding community representatives. Both my mother and father anguish from diabetes and depend on the fitness center to lose weight and combat this disease. Not only do my parents benefits from the leisure center continued operation, but also my daughter’s city championship swim team uses the pool for practice.
As an additional point to reject closure, you should recall how the facility integrates the community. Due to our geographical weather, rain subsists four months a year, and the center remains the only winter leisure activity option. Even more, a gymnasium embodies a meeting place for the community that promotes connections and strengthens our neighborhood.
If you proceed with the cease sports facility operations, we will lose a treasured gym that negatively impacts all residents. As you well know, we maintain an obesity epidemic in this area, and the gym closure will only increase this problem. Additionally, many citizens may consider relocating to the big city along with their spending money if you begin taking way amenities.
Please take these points in mind when pondering the closing of the sports and leisure facility.
With Regards
Arron Joseph
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| 2020-05-14 | AkhilaJesu | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42600896861 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83386784692 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681614349776 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1596494937 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.833333333 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182971827437 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574078097114 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362941305077 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970028886765 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299308818891 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 8.71597938144 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.