The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Here, we have a set of diagram. The first diagram spells out the information pertaining university sports Centre in present whilst second diagram reveals statistic regarding for plans of university sports Centre in future.
Overall, there are many changes in future sports Centre like, proper use of space, extend most of the things, dance studio and as well as extra changing room added.
To begin with the present sport Centre, there is two outdoor courts and they located in eastern and western side. However, in future plan, both outdoor courts were removed and establish new furniture design. New designs are like; two dance studios are added in northeastern side and in eastern side. New changing rooms are added in southeastern side and as well as southwestern side. New sports hall is planning to build beside of seating hall and opposite of dance studio.
Moreover, big leisure pool planning is maintained in future sports Centre which is located in northwestern and western side. Sports shop and café are established in southern side. However, some places are as it is in present. Like, 25m pool is in center of the sports Centre. Gym, changing room, seating arrangement, reception and main entrance are as it is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...g for plans of university sports Centre in future. Overall, there are many chang...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of university sports Centre in future. Overall, there are many changes in futur...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... as well as extra changing room added. To begin with the present sport Centre, ...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... side and as well as southwestern side. New sports hall is planning to build beside...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e and as well as southwestern side. New sports hall is planning to build beside of sea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ng is maintained in future sports Centre which is located in northwestern and wes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04926108374 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50115360799 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556650246305 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5268352037 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8461538462 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127839908824 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475257310008 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489769976355 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818661856538 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394542704964 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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