You would like to attend a music concert. Write a letter to your friend about the following:
• What concert it is.
• Why should you like him/her to join you?
• Suggest how and where you can meet and go to this concert
Dear Joe,
I hope you are doing well!
I am writing a letter to tell about one concert which is held at my city guru gram and very keen / interest in this. You are very clear I am the biggest fan of Alan Walker singer and his songs. In this concert, he is going to sing ample songs such as instrumental, piano and flute based folks. The ticket prices are not highly expensive and never want to miss this chance to live this musical program.
I would like to say you please join my accompany with me to take more interest in the club of musical vibes. You will seriously love this program and create more fun with me. Hence I strongly recommended you to come and join.
The concert will start at Friday 1 January at 8 pm and you will meet me at the stadium around 7 pm. But not able to pick from your home due to traffic issues. When you arrive at the nearby stadium at the mentioned time then we both take a cab to arrive for the concert.
I eagerly wait for your reply soon.
Yours’s Faithfully Jazz
Thanks in advance
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...is program and create more fun with me. Hence I strongly recommended you to come and ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'Yours'?
Suggestion: Yours
.... I eagerly wait for your reply soon. Yours’s Faithfully Jazz Thanks in advance
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21827411168 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11278388128 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670050761421 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5778531509 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.25 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348208116 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109081126511 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595455610502 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142504249286 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797101134409 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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