Nowadays, some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others believe zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Never before has the issue of keeping animals in zoo been at the centre of a debate than at the present. On the one hand, some people believe that zoos are not only important for entertainment but also for ecological education, and I agree. On the other hand, others disagree and claim that zoos are inappropriate.
One obvious reason why they think it is wrong to keep animals in the zoo is because this act causes discomfort to animals. When these creatures are taken away from their natural habitats, they are forced into adapting to a strange lifestyle, which is somewhat inconvenient. In the forest where they naturally live, for instance, animals hunt for preys and migrate to favourable locations, whereas in the zoo, they often stay idle and stagnant. However, ecologists are solving this issue by inventing artificial forests and feeding animals with mammals.
While I acknowledge this view, I believe keeping animals in zoo is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, it would further increase the knowledge of human about animals. In zoos, animal scientists appear to study more about the behavioral pattern, feeding habits amongst other ecological information of animals, resulting in a comprehensive understanding of their nature. That is why ecologists, in recent time, seem to have more accurate prediction of animal behaviour. Secondly, keeping animals in zoo is a source of entertainment to the public. From viewing animals to touching them and also listening to stories about their existence in the zoo, people find these activities exciting, leaving several individuals with loving memories. Perhaps, this is why psychologists often recommend visiting the zoo as a probable method of curing depression.
In conclusion, animals often feel imprisoned when they are kept in the zoo, but scientists understood this problem and took necessary measures to have it solved. Therefore, I support keeping animals in zoos since they will be entertaining the people and ecologically educating the researchers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33228840125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90576504294 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3545085568 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332967283563 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118983117491 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995782227885 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213784247324 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080258227307 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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