IELTS TEST IN CANADA DECEMBER 2019
You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say
– What was the problem?
– Explain why it is bothering you.
– Suggest a possible solution.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to complain about the dressing room in the city sports centre. Let me elaborate to you in detail. Last week, I went to the sports centre and found some serious problems in changing room that I want to share with you. Firstly, the air conditioning and door are not working properly and there is always a foul smell in the room most of the time.
It is well known that it is a reputed and elite sports complex in the city and the government also giving funds to this centre. People, therefore, cannot expect these things from your esteemed fitness centre and it is giving bad impressions who are visiting there.
At last, I would like to request you to fix the problems as early as possible and give direction to the maintenance department to take instant action and resolve the problems at earliest.
I hope you will consider my request and take action promptly and thanks for your consideration.
Yours Faithfully
Jai Prakash
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69491525424 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49599890492 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.375200258 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205471282556 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737956360352 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067137464533 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106248863176 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851415486305 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.