Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Unique ideas, endearng to one person is what sets one person apart from another. Ideas capable of changing the world and witnessing a future with new unrestarined horizon, showering optimism and prosperity. Idea, initially inchoate take birth in a curious mind and are nurtured by constant seeking of knowledge. Its amorphous nature slowly takes a form by convivtion and resilience put in by the human. In the end , it may work out or not but it surely does leave a impact, an experience and a source of inpspiration for others. This is how leaders are formed.
Once, your idea is put out in front of the world as your brain product, there may be myriads of reaction varying from plaundits to avaricous to jealousy. These are natural human fallacies. What I believe in is that one should have the mettlesome to display it and present it, to help you understand how the product is received by spectators. Just like Steve Jobs would do all the product launches with so much zeal and overflowing passion for the love of his products and truly what he beleived in. Although, there had been many controversies and gossips, his passion and conviction got him through the reins of disparate times and now Apple Inc. is a world renowned company.
The point is, not to give up no matter what, till you have faith in your brain-child's idea. If you want to live your child to see through the dark ages of criticism and doubts, you will have to persevere and hustle even harder to prove a point to all the people who never believed in you. Once, we are in the clearing from the forest of vulnerable insecurities, we could enjoy and bask the radiance of success. It is crucial to believe in yourself and all the people and things around you for thsi dream to come true. Your leagcy is bot built on the number of times you succesfully delivered a product in the market, but perennially the amount of times you never gave up after every snide, rebuke, betrayal and bitter downfall. This is what defines you and your idea.
Although, never get carries away with success and the decadent luxuries that come with it, listening to your peers and some guidance in form of moral support to bolster your proponents can help you stay grounded and humble. Being affable and modest, makes your ideas too, generate the same kind of positivity. Time to time guidance helps you make your ideas full proof and impregnable. This constitutes
Your legacy is built on the caustic hardships and comprises your blood, sweat and tears and immeasurable endurance to not give up when the stakes were high and you could walk away unharmed. Seeing your ideas through the tempestuous times of a roraring sea wave by honing your mind like a sharp knife, will give rise to the calm and beautiful sea waves gushing over your sails, as you leave your mark behind. Never give up and always believe in the serendipity of nature and the almighty. It is rightly said, god helps those who help themselves.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 414, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...silience put in by the human. In the end , it may work out or not but it surely do...
^^
Line 1, column 465, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ork out or not but it surely does leave a impact, an experience and a source of i...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, apart from, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 522.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68582375479 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48958066971 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5975033034 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.84 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.88 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114618461569 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310491998678 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340710209248 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646928103926 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026294805243 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 414, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...silience put in by the human. In the end , it may work out or not but it surely do...
^^
Line 1, column 465, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ork out or not but it surely does leave a impact, an experience and a source of i...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, apart from, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 522.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68582375479 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48958066971 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5975033034 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.84 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.88 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114618461569 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310491998678 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340710209248 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646928103926 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026294805243 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.