TOPIC: SPACE PROJECTS ARE BEING INVENTED.AGREE OR NOT?
In recent years, the question of whether the government should invest in space projects or not has been receiving a great deal of public intention. There are a growing number of people who hold a belief that life doesn’t exist on other planets. However, opponents express that is good to have a standby home for humans in the future.
Many people rejects extra terrestrial projects argue that there is no life existence on other planets. For example, a handful of researches has showed that during the space exploration by satellites, solely the Earth bears habitable features. Meanwhile, the solar system including terrestrial and Jovian, other plants, such as Venus ( the hottest planet), Neptune ( the coldest planet) or Jupiter, Saturn, are not able to sustain life for any creature. Therefore, it is unrealistic and waste of time and money to invest in such projects.
However, It is believed that space projects need to be invested in long-term for new potentiality to land and resources. For instance, Mars is known as a planet, which has similar features with the Earth because it used to have a water surface and high humidity before becoming a cold planet. Regenerating Mars can bring numerous benefits to resettle the humans in the future when the human population exceeds the carrying capacity of our planet or finding new renewable solution since humans is facing with the depletion of fossil fuels in the industrial development’s process. If the extra terrestrial projects succeeded, humans would have back-up plan for future generations’ lives.
In conclusion, we can not deny that both sides are well-grounded. In my opinion, I hope that whether these projects would implement or not, it is also advisable that we should take action to protect the Earth- our home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14383561644 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77197628149 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3640920198 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114777448597 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426073547851 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589796481911 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653175470102 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189958176281 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.