Due to television and the internet it is easier today for a large number of people to become famous. Is it a positive or a negative development?
Does the instant fame attain by the utility of television and internet is long term or short term? As a matter of fact, many a man, more often than not believes that the television and internet has served as a boon for the people who have immense talent but did not get recognition in the past and these public platforms gives them an opportunity to exhibit their skills. I believe that it is a welcoming trend because it has acted as a medium to open new doors of opportunities and success, especially for those who do not have strong financial resources.
Arguably, the social media applications like Instagram, YouTube, Facebook etcetera have not become popular across the globe for no reason. Apart from that, the majority of population in the world enjoys watching talent reality shows over their television sets. These reality shows give various people chance to showcase their skills and talent, which would not only make them a famous name of every household but also gives them big amount of monetary prize. Since every person has cellphones with internet in it, it becomes very easy for a person to bring his skills over public domain, where he would get the fame he deserves and the desired business offers. For instance , The New York Times conducted a survey and it was discovered that the level of employment has increased by 25% in the entertainment and business industry , the producers have found it time saving and profitable to invest over social media sensations and television reality shows participants because they are already very famous among masses and their talent has already been displayed over these platforms and owing to this, the producers have saved a huge amount of time and money because now they do not have to take the pain of long auditions across the globe .
Notwithstanding the brighter side , another school of thought argues that currently , several untalented people are getting fame briskly because people are liking their cringe worthy and idiotic acts ,which has no element of productivity in it and the talented content creators find it unjustified because they had to work harder to create the fan base which these untalented people got over night. Moreover, there is a huge market of paid likes and followers which misleads the producers into investing into these fraud online celebrities, this discourages the real talent alot. Despite internet, several television reality show stars get lost into fog eventually because they were not able to maintain their fame and healthy reputation which they achieved within no time as they have not gained any experience through long struggle. But I opine that , although it is unfair that various talent less people get the instant popularity and brand deals for which a talented person has worked day and night with honesty and zeal , but it is evident that only those who have a productive skill and perseverance in their art gets a long time success. People may get entertained by the cringe worthy acts but they would forget it within no time, but they would always follow the real talent because a real talent is always appreciated and remembered permanently. For Example , the social media application Instagram started taking strict actions against the fake and paid followers which were used by many celebrities and online influencers , no sooner did the Instagram corporation banned all the fake accounts , than the public saw a drastic fall in the following counts of various social media influencers and celebrities. This brought a lot of backlash over these famous personalities and people stopped following them after seeing the real picture. But the surprise was that the talented social media stars who had small number of followers remained unaffected by this step because their followings were genuine and they became more famous because people recognized their hard work.
To conclude , people are wise enough to give temporary attention to a unworthy but stupid materials because it is their guilty pleasure , but they give their evergreen love and recognition to the real skills and qualities , that is why many people came but only those who had the passion towards their talent made it to the top and they are still respected by the people. However , internet and media is a blessing for the people of small regions , patience and dedication are the key to acquire the desired aim , one must keep on displaying his skill with a never ending hope , it would eventually lead to a personally stable and professionally enriching society , lest the good outcomes should be far out of reach.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
...lity of television and internet is long term or short term? As a matter of fact, man...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this reality' or 'These realities'?
Suggestion: This reality; These realities
...ality shows over their television sets. These reality shows give various people chance to sho...
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...he desired business offers. For instance , The New York Times conducted a survey ...
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... desired business offers. For instance , The New York Times conducted a survey an...
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... the entertainment and business industry , the producers have found it time saving...
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Suggestion: .
... pain of long auditions across the globe . Notwithstanding the brighter side , ...
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...e . Notwithstanding the brighter side , another school of thought argues that c...
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Suggestion: ,
... school of thought argues that currently , several untalented people are getting f...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...are getting fame briskly because people are liking their cringe worthy and idiotic acts ,w...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing their cringe worthy and idiotic acts ,which has no element of productivity in ...
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Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fraud' or 'these frauds'?
Suggestion: this fraud; these frauds
...leads the producers into investing into these fraud online celebrities, this discourages th...
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Line 5, column 852, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... through long struggle. But I opine that , although it is unfair that various tale...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rked day and night with honesty and zeal , but it is evident that only those who h...
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Line 5, column 1369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and remembered permanently. For Example , the social media application Instagram ...
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Line 5, column 1535, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... many celebrities and online influencers , no sooner did the Instagram corporation...
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Line 5, column 1606, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...corporation banned all the fake accounts , than the public saw a drastic fall in t...
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Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...recognized their hard work. To conclude , people are wise enough to give temporar...
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Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e enough to give temporary attention to a unworthy but stupid materials because i...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ials because it is their guilty pleasure , but they give their evergreen love and ...
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Line 6, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gnition to the real skills and qualities , that is why many people came but only t...
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Line 6, column 379, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e still respected by the people. However , internet and media is a blessing for th...
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Line 6, column 446, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...blessing for the people of small regions , patience and dedication are the key to ...
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Line 6, column 511, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n are the key to acquire the desired aim , one must keep on displaying his skill w...
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Line 6, column 576, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...aying his skill with a never ending hope , it would eventually lead to a personall...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ble and professionally enriching society , lest the good outcomes should be far ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, apart from, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 44.0 10.4138276553 423% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 24.0651302605 291% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3830.0 1615.20841683 237% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 763.0 315.596192385 242% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01965923984 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.25570686339 4.20363070211 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59094697773 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 367.0 176.041082164 208% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480996068152 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1207.8 506.74238477 238% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.87024776 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.777777778 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.3888888889 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134874335033 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522536658292 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254230824397 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965526136421 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178402400331 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
...lity of television and internet is long term or short term? As a matter of fact, man...
^^^^
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this reality' or 'These realities'?
Suggestion: This reality; These realities
...ality shows over their television sets. These reality shows give various people chance to sho...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he desired business offers. For instance , The New York Times conducted a survey ...
^^
Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... desired business offers. For instance , The New York Times conducted a survey an...
^^
Line 3, column 830, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the entertainment and business industry , the producers have found it time saving...
^^
Line 3, column 1240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... pain of long auditions across the globe . Notwithstanding the brighter side , ...
^^
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e . Notwithstanding the brighter side , another school of thought argues that c...
^^
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... school of thought argues that currently , several untalented people are getting f...
^^
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...are getting fame briskly because people are liking their cringe worthy and idiotic acts ,w...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing their cringe worthy and idiotic acts ,which has no element of productivity in ...
^^
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fraud' or 'these frauds'?
Suggestion: this fraud; these frauds
...leads the producers into investing into these fraud online celebrities, this discourages th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 852, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... through long struggle. But I opine that , although it is unfair that various tale...
^^
Line 5, column 1026, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rked day and night with honesty and zeal , but it is evident that only those who h...
^^
Line 5, column 1369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and remembered permanently. For Example , the social media application Instagram ...
^^
Line 5, column 1535, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... many celebrities and online influencers , no sooner did the Instagram corporation...
^^
Line 5, column 1606, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...corporation banned all the fake accounts , than the public saw a drastic fall in t...
^^
Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...recognized their hard work. To conclude , people are wise enough to give temporar...
^^
Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e enough to give temporary attention to a unworthy but stupid materials because i...
^
Line 6, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ials because it is their guilty pleasure , but they give their evergreen love and ...
^^
Line 6, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gnition to the real skills and qualities , that is why many people came but only t...
^^
Line 6, column 379, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e still respected by the people. However , internet and media is a blessing for th...
^^
Line 6, column 446, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...blessing for the people of small regions , patience and dedication are the key to ...
^^
Line 6, column 511, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n are the key to acquire the desired aim , one must keep on displaying his skill w...
^^
Line 6, column 576, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...aying his skill with a never ending hope , it would eventually lead to a personall...
^^
Line 6, column 663, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ble and professionally enriching society , lest the good outcomes should be far ou...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, apart from, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 44.0 10.4138276553 423% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 24.0651302605 291% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3830.0 1615.20841683 237% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 763.0 315.596192385 242% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01965923984 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.25570686339 4.20363070211 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59094697773 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 367.0 176.041082164 208% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480996068152 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1207.8 506.74238477 238% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.87024776 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.777777778 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.3888888889 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134874335033 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522536658292 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254230824397 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965526136421 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178402400331 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.