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It is important to know how to play a musical instrument. do u agree or disagree ?
Music by itself, is really very interesting and being able to play a musical instrument is a fascinating deed. However, I don't think that it is important to know how to play a musical instrument for many reasons.
First of all, I think that playing a musical instrument is a gifted talent, that can evolve in certain people over time. Most of the popular artists who play on a musical instruments, are usually born within a musical family. For example Bethhoven, one the most famous pianist in the world, was born in a family that was indulged into music. Both his father and his grand father were...
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