The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
The given graph illustrates how many views that two diffirent music sites get over the period of 15 days
Overall, it could be seen than the number of views count on both these sites were having an upward trend. In addition, pop parade was noticed for having a highest figured over the period shown.
Starting off from 120 thousand views in the first day, the number of viewer remained stable at the same number in day 3. It however lose it momentum and fall drastically until it reached rock bottom at below 40000 views in days 7. After that, it began to recovered the pace and then on day 11, the number of pop parade visitor recorded a significant climb to more than 150000 views and then continued it upward trend until it reached it peak at 160 thousands on day 15.
As for music choice, at 40000 visitors, it began to rise gradually to 60 and then dropped back to 20 thousands on the fourth day. After that, it recorded a period of fluctuation between day 4 and day 11. However, the number of music choice’s visitor grew significantly to more than 140000 on day 14 and then suddenly fall back to less than 80 thousands.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-03 | Giang Tran | 84 | view |
| 2024-11-02 | Giang Tran | 67 | view |
| 2024-11-02 | Giang Tran | 67 | view |
| 2024-11-02 | Giang Tran | 67 | view |
| 2024-10-26 | Giang Tran | 73 | view |
- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London
- The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web 78
- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London 100
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including for food and research Discuss both view and give your opinion 78
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including for food and research Discuss both view and give your opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...tion, pop parade was noticed for having a highest figured over the period shown. ...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'loses'?
Suggestion: loses
...at the same number in day 3. It however lose it momentum and fall drastically until ...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trends'?
Suggestion: trends
...0000 views and then continued it upward trend until it reached it peak at 160 thousan...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peaks'?
Suggestion: peaks
...ued it upward trend until it reached it peak at 160 thousands on day 15. As for mus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, then, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46376811594 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33319830377 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2511520615 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131160077103 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578246192452 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596987573473 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097729313484 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579500553199 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.