Modern cultures around the world have become similar as compared to the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
In the past few decades, modern civilizations have become more and more similar, which is different in the past. Globalization is the main reason of this trend and it can be divided into two parts.
First of all, globalization results in high population mobility which carries a culture from one place to another. In this way multiple cultures merge together and they become alike eventually. For instance, when Asian people immigrated to United States, they brought their food cultures and living habits. Therefore, plenty of Asian towns are established, such as China Town, Japanese Town and Korean Town. Every time when Asian people arrive at those towns, they could feel as similar as returning home, since their cultures have merged into the local's.
Second of all, globalization leads to the heat of learning foreign languages, especially English as it is the widest spoken around the world. When people begin to learn a language, they start to accept every kind of cultural output in that language, such as books ,music, movies and TV programs. Cite Chinese people as an example, in the past decade, the number of Chinese people, especially younger ones who are fond of listening to English songs and watching English movies is rising dramatically. This is an evidence that Western and Eastern cultures are mixing up and they are turning more similar with each other.
As the reasons are stated above, it is an advantageous development in my opinion, since people from different cultures could get closer and build a stronger relationship when their cultures are becoming similar. In addition, people could feel more comfortable staying at a place where there a living environment like their hometown, so that they could concentrate on their works or studies more efficiently. Moreover, it is beneficial for people to gain more knowledge from a culture when they are starting to learn the language spoken in that culture.
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13291139241 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65241226411 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8948377562 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197357208556 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705320408333 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679975614893 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129974361825 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520929570711 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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