Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighborhood. Do you think is a good idea? Why or why not? Explain your position using specific reasons and examples.
In general, industrialization is a significant part of modern life. As a result of the revolution in the industry, factories growth and allow people to have a high-quality life and opportunities for creation. However, they can be very harmful if their location is not suitable. I think building a large factory near the residential area is terrible. I feel this way for some reason. The following paragraphs will substantiate my statement.
To begin with, factories make a lot of noise, which is intolerable. Indeed, they have huge machines and instruments that work not in silence but with a loud, disturbing sound. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a child, we had a neighbor who was interested in having a big house. In our area, building a house was in accordance with the permission of the municipality. Therefore, they couldn’t make a house as much bigger as they want to. So they migrated to another part of the city which was near to the Industrial Town. But after a while, they were very annoyed by the noise of the factories, and they returned to their old house.
Secondly, pollution is the primary and integral part of the factories. They produce lots of chemical wastes and pollute the environment. In some cases, being touched with these wastes is very harmful to human beings and animals. As an illustration, one of my friend’s father was a worker in a factory. He worked for an extended period, but unfortunately, he fell ill due to exposure to chemicals, and after suffering for one year, he died. Therefore, the location of the factory is one of the most critical factors of its establishing.
As a final point, people need peace and quiet when they are at home after being at work and getting tired. In the situation that factories are established near the living area, being comfortable is impossible because of the traffic of vehicles carrying factory products. For instance, if I imagine that there is a big factory near my house, I cannot live anymore in this area, and I decide to leave this place.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with being near to the factory. As I mentioned above, there are lots of reasons that prove to establish factories close to the living area is wrong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in general, as a result, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83762886598 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91966857851 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523195876289 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0353089239 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.08 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.52 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104593112645 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312622945177 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413254742551 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652571273142 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292067355941 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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