Should education and health care be free of charge and funded by the government or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services.?
Discuss the above and give your opinion with an example.
Education and healthcare are the basic prerequisites for living a healthier lifestyle. The source of funds to fulfil these requirements is the issue to be considered, whether it should be financed by the government or individuals are solely responsible for the same. The essay will discuss the role of both sides, in my opinion, both contribution is essential for better growth of the country.
On the one hand, it is the responsibility of the government to provide basic medicare and education facilities with no charge especially for those who are living below the poverty line as they cannot afford the cost of highly chargeable hospitals and schools. For instance, in India, nearly 8.5% of the total population are deprived of the fundamental right of health and education due to lack of funds.
Besides this, innumerable migrants move to the country in order to meet their education and medical requirement, several policies regarding these sectors should be introduced by the government to lure the immigrants for the benefit of the country in the long run.
On the other hand, individuals who are ambitious for various facilities are responsible to pay for extra services. Nowadays, private academic institutions and hospitals are all the rage as people disburse a large proportion of their earnings to meet out their status of living. For example, an international school charges an average rs.15000 fee for primary level schooling. Therefore to fulfil once need according to their dignity person should be in charge to bear the additional expense.
To conclude, both government and people's contribution is entirely necessary for the betterment of society. I believe needy sectors should be taken care of by the government while others should bear the cost as far as possible to maintain the balance in the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 377, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
....15000 fee for primary level schooling. Therefore to fulfil once need according to their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22711864407 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94403218073 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0259736392 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393797422597 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126362980628 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695445988076 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201098914606 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047454429807 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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