Write a letter to a friend asking for help moving to a new flat. In your letter include:
why you are moving
a description of the new flat
why you need your friend’s help
Dear Richard,
I hope you have been keeping well and that this letter finds you and your wife in good spirits. I am writing to ask a favour with regards to the move I told you about last we met.
As you know, my wife and I are planning to relocate to the other side of town to be closer to our work. After two months of searching, we have finally found a place we feel comfortable with. There are two balconies, a spare bedroom, a study, and a small studio which we are going to convert into a painting room for my wife. The flat also comes with a handful of extra items, such as a barbecue, air conditioning units in all rooms, and two flat screen TVs.
We are short a few hands to help with the move this Saturday. Could I ask you to pitch in? My wife and I would be delighted to offer you dinner in compensation. No pressure to join, of course, but it would really help us a lot if you could find the time.
Your friend,
Ryan
- You want your company to relocate you to a new company 1 Explain why do you want to move 2 What can you do for moving 3 what you want company to do 78
- Write a letter to a friend asking for help moving to a new flat In your letter include why you are moving a description of the new flat why you need your friend s help 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, really, so, well, of course, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10810810811 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22516321904 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1169408836 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254552955737 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103194179527 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698449791348 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16064749346 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724719826275 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.