• Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age. This is called "peer pressure".
• Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
Human beings are naturally influenced by their surroundings, especially from their kind. As well, young generations are not logically an exempt from this trend which stemmed from their relationship with their peers. I believe this phenomenon bring about a balanced mixture of advantages and disadvantages.
In one hand, however this influence might seem disruptive at the first look, with a right mentoring, it could have an educational value. Parents have to control their offspring relationships regarding their behavioral intakes. Subsequently, with confined environment in which parent know who their children are in touch with, they can take and grow merits of other kids in their own. Furthermore, this somewhat competition gives adults an opportunity to take an advantage of the situation and nurture good qualities in their children through instill a sense of competition in them. For illustration, grown-ups can effortlessly teach a child to read books by intriguing a sense of jealousy toward peers, rooted in rivalry between them, which will immediately act as a fuel for the activity.
On the other hand, this measure not only creates a stressful environment for people in their first years of living but also could cause long-term psychological issues which could cause multiple adolescent problems in the future. Moreover, if parents are not able to watch who their youngsters are in touch, it will result in a disaster. a case in point in addiction to drug in young ages, when children join a group of peers they would do whatever it requires to be accepted in the team which eventually could give a rise to the chance of being dragged into hazardous behaviors like doing drugs. These all are reasons to be careful with what drawbacks teenagers could face with, due to the "peer pressure".
To encapsulate, impacts of people in a same age group, particularly young, on each other perform as a double-edged sword which with or without parents' supervision could result in constructive or negative implications, without surpassing one another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29393939394 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01818942435 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.179711142 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.384615385 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249415848347 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822928305327 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385086290401 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144062629335 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184254819708 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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