The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce fertilizer (compost).
The diagram gives data on the production of fertilizer which is made out of recycled organic waste material.
Overall, there are five steps included in the process in order to come up with compost.
Firstly, there is a 2 cubic meter plastic container with some openings around so as to allow the air to get inside. Next, the container will serve as a basin where newspapers, grass, and wasted food will be kept at an accurate measurement and order. Food waste should fill the tank up to 15 cm from the bottom, followed by 15 cm of grass and newspapers on the top which does not exceed the second air vent. Following this, nitrogen and water are added to the mixture and it should be noted that only hot water can be excepted accepted.
At the four-step, the plastic receptacle will be kept closed and heated continuously over 6 months. It can be seen that during this stage, the gas released from the mixture heated escapes through the air slots. Finally, after six months of incubation, the product which is compost is formed and ready to go for gardening.
- The maps show the change of an office building between the present and the future Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 83
- The maps show a road system as it is now and the proposed changes in the future to reduce the number of accidents Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 72
- The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced Summarize the important information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 75
- The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006 73
- The table below shows the salaries of secondary high school teachers in 2009 Describe the main features of the figure 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...tic container with some openings around so as to allow the air to get inside. Next, the ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, second, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65608465608 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44081133616 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.1472526476 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.7777777778 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117789445195 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520145674669 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896529270104 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1025343825 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113764320849 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.