Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In real life, people always encounter many difficulties and frustrations. Some people try to solve them, while others try to avoid them. So in my opinion, we must deal with our own setbacks so that we will not be overcome by difficulties or setbacks.
Frist of all, some people tend to think of escaping them when they encountering setbacks and difficulties. It seems to me that this situation is going to get worse, For example, you're a school basketball team and you're always replaced by someone else if you don't practice your skills and your stamina. Therefore, in my opinion, when faced with difficulties and setbacks, we must find a way to solve them and not let them affect us.
I think it's just this kind of frustration and difficulty that allows us to achieve better goals. We must make full use of this opportunity to find a way to solve this problem and realize our value. The people who can contribute greatly to the development of society. There are not many scientists and physicists in real life who will encounter many difficulties in their experiments, and they are also going through a lot of experiments to get the last results they want. As far as I'm concerned, we have to solve these problems. These scientists and physicists are our role models.
So in times of difficulty and frustration, we have to think about solving them instead of just accepting them, which will show you how strong and hard-working you are. And in the long run, your efforts pay off absolutely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74329501916 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76339518712 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6188019828 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4285714286 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112579080055 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04136181516 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370109575861 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730087915081 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038805537947 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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