Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, we hear so many controversial issues on home made food. It is thought by some, that cooking and eating home made food is best for individuals and families, while others opined that eating at eateries or outside the home is better. Well, I am of the opinion, that home made meals are preferrably advisable for individuals and families. In this essay, we would see the reasons why.
On the one hand, " Health is Wealth " they say, and anyone who values health would be very careful of food intake, as well as other edible products. Moreover, when eating outside the home, little do we know about the condiments used in preparation of the food, and this could result in an allergy or even turn out to be really detrimental to health.
Furthermore, research has shown that eating consistently outside the home has been a leading cause of obesity over the years. Also, home made meals improve accountability of the consumer in determination of calories taken daily.
On the other hand, the poor hygienic environment, poor cooking hygiene or poor personal hygiene of the eatery and consumer could also result in a medical condition leading to hospitalisation of the consumer but when meals are prepared at home, the individual is well aware of wellness, so every food preparation could be done under supervision, accountability and sterility.
Furthermore, most times, home made meals saves cost. A good home made meal might not cost up to a quarter/half of the amount spent on food in an eatery at the same time. Moreso, there's a certainty of the condiments used in the preparation of the food, and a way in which certain condiments which help in playing medical roles could also be added such as immunity boosters, weight stabilizers, etc. when home-made meals are prepared.
Lastly, home made meals are of great benefits to Individuals already diagnosed with medical conditions that require a routine diet e.g. Renal failure, Hepatitis, Diabetes etc. to mention a few.
In conclusion, home made meals help in calorie intake determination, cost conservation and health certainty in individuals and families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., furthermore, lastly, moreover, really, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08522727273 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86629003128 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.6789829991 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190988178239 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068525732392 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743574083682 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943845253591 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668733308433 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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