Nowadays, there have been a lot of controversial statement flying around, which states that, the explicit reason for wealth is so that you can extend a helping hand to the needy. In my opinion, I disagree with this stance. This essay will give reasons why I stand to disagree with the opinion.
One the one hand, my getting rich is not basically for the poor but rather to live a good life. Having everything I want at my beck and call. Moreso, lending a helping hand is a thing of choice, it is far from helping the poor.
90% of articles published on "stay wealthy blog", "states that rich men we see today got their money as a result of relentless efforts".
However, this resultant effect are not for helping other but by becoming a celebrity in future. Money paves way for a whole lot of things like; accessibility to places where the poor can not be, Recognition, to mention a few.
One the other hand, another principal reasons of getting rich is to make wealth readily available for coming generations. For example, Mr Dangote is a well known, influential and connected man with affluence. If his child, or children, or even his children's children, are to go to places today, respect will be accorded to them, why? because their father had paved a way of recognition and affluent.
Moreso, being rich has to do with investment, the reason why one could become wealthy might be to become one of the top 3 investors in a reputable country of ours, Nigeria.
In conclusion, the key thing about being rich is not just about getting the chances to help us, but about living a good life, making wealth readily available for your generations to come as well as becoming a noticable investor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ich states that, the explicit reason for wealth is so that you can extend a helpi...
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... effect are not for helping other but by becoming a celebrity in future. Money pa...
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...ping other but by becoming a celebrity in future. Money paves way for a whole lot of thi...
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...ebrity in future. Money paves way for a whole lot of things like; accessibility to places...
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... respect will be accorded to them, why? because their father had paved a way of recogni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74418604651 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70869066346 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.14815083 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213248122356 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658307112015 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536798004057 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102316734458 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496360288567 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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