Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child? (5-10) years old)
1. Being helpful
2. Being honest
3. Being well-organized
Among parents, it is widely acknowledged that in order for them to raise a child who will be proper and worthy of the society is to utilize certain methods to help them and these young people in the future. Some might maintain the view that being well-organized and honest to a child is the most significant key in order for that child to become a valuable person. Although these using methods is actually very efficient and reasonable, assisting a young child who does not know much about his surroundings allocates a special significance to itself. Hereinafter, by alluding to three outstanding reasons, I will shed light on my own perspective.
The first noteworthy point regarding the issue is that not only will being helpful towards a child supports one in order to raise that child much more appropriately, but also it will give the child the chance to learn how to cooperate with other people, especially his parents, for this would boost the self-confidence in that child. For example, when I was a little child, my mom always used to help me in many different ways, such as playing with my toys, working with my computer, etc. This in fact assisted me through life in order to make a better relationship with my mother and as a result, heightened my self-confidence in order to be an efficient person.
Furthermore, being helpful towards a child will assure him that he is worthy as a person and that there are people who care about him and the lifestyle he is going to take. For example, during my elementary school, had my mother left me alone doing all my home works, I would not have been able to accomplish them successfully. Her help in fact gave me the opportunity to feel better about myself as a person.
The other axiomatic point regarding the issue if it was not for parents and other people's help, children would not have been able to move forward and choose the most proper way, especially while they are only children. To exemplify my very own experience again, since I used to be a very shy person during my childhood, my mother always assisted me in communicating with others and therefore, because of her efforts of that time, I am now able to socialize with others much more appropriately.
To make a long story short, being an honest and well-organized person is extremely important, especially for a parent; however, being helpful and always being there for a little child is much more significant, for not only will it give the child in order to know himself and his interests better, but also it will assist him in his future's life obstacles, which as a result will boost the child's self-confidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
...child, my mom always used to help me in many different ways, such as playing with my toys, wor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will boost the childs self-confidence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72234273319 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7986244703 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459869848156 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.319216616 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.461538462 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4615384615 20.6045352989 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251544048939 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993128443849 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822521446991 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159077501548 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661977159402 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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