People today are much better informed about international news than they were in the past.
Since we live in a modern society, people today know much better what is happening around the world. During last twenty years, we had a great improvement on world’s technolgy, people got connected with each other, and the business markets are strong correlated. Due to all this better conditions, we realize that population have a greater information.
A first reason why people are much better informed nowadays is related with world’s improvement in technology. After 70’s and 80’s, we saw a great number of computer companies starting their business around the world. With faster computers, people obtained a good way to get access into world’s news. Even with people still using a newspaper as an information’s source, our perception shows that young people migrated from newspaper to tablets and computer to read their news.
Nowadays we are seeing a new way to share information with social media. People are connected with each other around the world and are sending articles, news, and different kinds of information by Facebook or Instagram. Unfortunatelly, we are realizing a huge number of fake news because there is no filter on what people share.
As a third reason, the world has all markets connected today. Companies have theirs stores and offices in different countries and all business market is linked. Commodities and technology have been negociated everyday and they make people information a necessity. Stock markets are totally connected and we figure it out how each country’s economic influences another one. Consequently, people need to have a good source of information to maintain the world’s markets running.
To conclude, people around the world have better information compared with last century. New improvement in technology and a correlated market force them to a faster and greater information’s method. But, even with all new tools that we have today, the old newspaper never dies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, still, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31921824104 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87843585103 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9271114662 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.7222222222 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220652069472 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827462621088 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603299622898 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137990214181 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240847241406 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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