Which is more important for a leader: the ability to win an argument about an issue, or the ability to help others come to an agreement about an issue?
The major ability of a leader is to make people agree with each other and put all efforts in the same direction. While some people think that their arguments are always the best, good leaders can motivate people to think together. Different reasons exist to force me to think about it. Firs of all, a leader will have better results with his staff working in the same direction. Sharing responsabilities and making people feel important, are good qualities of a great leader.
When a leader works with his team in the same direction, results are totally better. If people put all efforts to achieve the same objective, they can have a wonderful result. Sometimes, this sum of efforts makes the project easier.
A second reason for a good leader to help others to an agreement is his possibility to share responsabilities between his group. When people share what they have to do and their knowledge, they will get the final result faster and with a marvelous result. This is the how big companies are working nowadays.
Thinking about the way a good boss has to work, I would say that he has to share all responsabilities. Nowadays, nobody can work alone. Additionally, when a leader gives someone his real importance, the person is motivated to give his best.
To sum up, I am convinced that good leaders always have the ability to make everybody works in the same way. Having the same opinion, normally people will have better results. And when companies compare the results between a person working alone versus a group working together, they realize the difference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while, as to, to sum up, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85130111524 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67261685125 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516728624535 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9791716159 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.7647058824 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108717878119 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369315785587 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535952027037 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061850613869 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411994588181 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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