organizing a large family celebration such as wedding can often create problems
what can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest?
Arranging a family celebration like wedding can be really problematic. There are a lot need to be planned which can be stressful as well. In the following essay I will discuss the problems and say how they could be solved.
One of the reasons that makes planning hard is the high-cost. There are many things that should be payed for such as food, decoration and clothes specially for the wedding party. Furthermore, the expectations of the guests from the celebration can make it even harder to decide for the things above.
Another problem that you may encounter is to managing the best time for holding a family celebration because people are busy these days and cannot make it easily. So, if you fail to choose the right time, all of the guests you have invited will not come.
In order to tackle these problems, it is better to invite the ones who are close and means a lot to you. In this way you don’t have to spend a lot of money for large number of people. Also, you can choose a holiday for the celebration to be held so that it will have less difficulty for the members to attend.
To sum up, although planning a large family event is not easy and could be stressful, if it is well planned and you consider everything to manage it the best way possible you can, by reduction the number of problems you will enjoy the celebration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
..., if you fail to choose the right time, all of the guests you have invited will not come. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47154471545 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46156253325 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540650406504 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7836988046 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286338359867 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106981368209 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788580205219 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166509493782 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697003084066 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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