People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still do not take responsibility to protect it. Why is it? What can be done to encourage people to protect it?
Undoubtedly, climate change is becoming one of the most contentious issues of the twenty-first century. Even though most of us know the importance of the environment, people do not take initiatives to protect it from getting deteriorating. This essay believes that the primary reason for such level of irresponsibility due to people’s attitude and they must be educated about the dire consequence that will follow if this trend continues.
Majority of people think that it is the duty of a government to look after the environmental issues instead of taking matters into their hands. Since they pay taxes, they hold governments responsible for taking care of these issues. In addition, even if they try to assist in alleviating environment contamination, their contribution would make little to no effect in restoring our planet’s environment. For instance, a movement of call pooling was started by an Indian state named Delhi but after some days as its residents were not getting the anticipated results, they discarded this whole idea.
In order to pursue people to take responsibility for the environment, they should be taught about various aspects of the environment that have a direct impact on their lives. To cite an example, the government should publish reports of the worsening air quality due to which the cases of asthmatic patients are increasing. Also, holding seminars to spread awareness about how the single-use items are causing harm to our environment after either being buried or burnt. Certainly, such programs would assist people to realize to limit their household as well as industrial waste and take pro-active measures to protect the environment.
To conclude, everyone should realize their little contribution can go a long way to protect the environment. If governments try to teach and aware people about their responsibility our planet’s health can be improved drastically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36754966887 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08695416167 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.288589299 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.692307692 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239019842612 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888206921691 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816866187526 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157176026784 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557182925175 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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