There are other things that motivate a person to work, but money is the most compelling.
In your opinion, how influential is the power of money?
Current scenario, denizens get motivated easily by an enormous amount of items, nevertheless money is necessitous for them. What I reckon is that people may be influenced by money because of splendid power of its. However, some other factors play a paramount roller on masses life span. Reasons associated with this phenomena are discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To embark with, certainly, with several intensions, money has a massive influential on individuals life. First and foremost, having a exceeding collection of money, masses can afford a good education because there are many international institutes that expect almost 1 lakh fees from learners. Consequently, with appropriate degree, they pupils shall acquire precious job. In addition, in every challenging situation, money would be essential alternative as compared to other factors. For example, although people can get rid of hazardous grief be it covid - 19 or adis, it requires excessive amount of money.
In contrary, when it comes to acquire real happiness, money cannot be the best option anymore because real happiness does not lie in the success and fame. Thus, one can get the empathy and fulfil his life with multitude enjoyments but they person should be happy with their lifestyle. For example, bill gate was not have money before, but since he had worked hard with happiness and hence he acquired the post of world richest man.
In conclusion, when it comes to get job and maintain well-being, denizen should have vast collection of money, however money can not be used to acquire a real happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2431372549 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78372596515 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674509803922 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7487948239 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.846153846 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204161501725 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724330934331 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442349288442 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129028350151 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251849238131 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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