You live in a block of flats, your neighbor makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord.
In your letter, you should:
• explain the situation
• tell him/her how you are effected by this
• suggest what you want the landlord to do.
Dear Landlord,
I am the new buyer at your resort, where I live in block at the 4th floor. I am writing this letter to announce you about an annoying situation that’s happening lately in this block and disturbing all the neighbors.
The guys that live at the ground floor apartment, each night they need to have a party and invite their friends to it. Music, voices and shouting late nights are happening, even they throw their wastes from food and beverages in front of the entrance, where we smell bad odors each morning.
However, everyone in this block is complaining from this situation that is happening. All of us are married people and we have kids; they need to rest in order to wake up to schools the next day and us to attend our jobs with positive vibes and motivations. Schools are contacting us daily that the kids are arriving late to their classes, and less concentration on their studies.
Therefore, after several negotiations with those people we did not reach to any solution. So, the neighbors and I we are informing you about what is happening, in order to find a final solution for those people by firing them from this building or move them to another block. If we did not get any reply soon from your side, we will claim this problem to the police, where they will act on their own.
Thanks for your consideration, we are waiting for your response shortly, hope we hear good news from your side.
Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... good news from your side. Sincerely,
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65369649805 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4552930001 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.3706953147 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.727272727 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199939774982 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747418123932 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755348296972 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111245029243 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819143660283 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.