in the future, it seems it will become difficult to live on the Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
It is true that living on the Earth become more and more difficult with for the human and other species. Many people think that we should spent money on researching other planets to live. In my opinion, We disagree with this view.
By growing economy, this make Earth worsen and arduous for us. Over- consumption is one of part cause which make deplete natural resourse. For example. some things were excavated until exhausted such as coal, fossil and fish in the sea. Moreover, there are many manufacture discharge into rivers result in water polluting, emission form traffic pollute air, whether is harsher and hotter. Human suffer them will damge healthy and can be cancer.
Personally, I suppose that deteriorating Earth was affected by mainly human, so we must find resolution to maintain our evironment. Firstly, every individual should create habit evironment- friendly as limit to use ny long, plastic,.. Futher,we need to policy to encourage that every body have limit of number children. Business take resolutions to solve waste of themselves and government have to control the. Finally, financial resource should be use to develop technical and scientist which can keep our community clean and provide recycle energy.
In conclussion, spending resourse on studying other planet is impossible and should not priority. We need to concentrate on positive method which was mention above to living more on Earth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, i suppose, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25877192982 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62019100307 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697368421053 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4387477088 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283140556418 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806049766542 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106784218741 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182883336236 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1643915611 0.056905535591 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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