WRITNG TASK 2 TEST 6 CAM 12
According to recent surveys, population pyramid tends to widen its bottom, which means that the young outnumber the older counterpart.this certainly leads to a number of both pro and cons now as well as in the future. however it can be seen that the benefits of this phenomenon is head and shoulders above its drawbacks.
In the one hand, young adults have more abilities as well as energy to take charge in a great number of jobs. People at the age of over 50 are considered to be slow, easily get diseases related to skeleton, common flu, so they tend to be absent in the company for treatment for such a long time even up to two months, which dramatically affects working process, prolongs time for producing. Therefore, in order to increase efficiency, make more profit,employers always take priority youngsters over others. In addition, they are so consider activities that there's no doubt that the older you are,The less you are flexible.nowadays, recruiters require the high adaption from candidates, so they can be easily suitable to a variety of positions.This characteristic rarely exists in the older as nearly they get used to original style of working, it's hard for them to change immediately. Last but not least, young adults have capability of approaching to advanced technology.they master how to run new equipments, apply modern techniques in fields such as IT, AI,..
Conversely, it still remains a typical disadvantage that owing to age, young people have less chances to contact with numerous things, they also lack in skills and experience. Therefore, these often start work mechanically following to what they learn from school.
In short, the increase of infants leads to the outweight of youngsters, which plays an important role in structure of labor. It. Changes the quality of employees more active, energy And modernness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... and cons now as well as in the future. however it can be seen that the benefits of thi...
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Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
... and cons now as well as in the future. however it can be seen that the benefits of thi...
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Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , employers
...to increase efficiency, make more profit,employers always take priority youngsters over ot...
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Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...n, they are so consider activities that theres no doubt that the older you are,The les...
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Line 2, column 595, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...t theres no doubt that the older you are,The less you are flexible.nowadays, recruit...
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Line 2, column 743, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...sily suitable to a variety of positions.This characteristic rarely exists in the old...
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Line 2, column 790, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...aracteristic rarely exists in the older as nearly they get used to original style ...
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Line 2, column 1059, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...dern techniques in fields such as IT, AI,.. Conversely, it still remains a typica...
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Line 2, column 1060, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ern techniques in fields such as IT, AI,.. Conversely, it still remains a typical...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ge that owing to age, young people have less chances to contact with numerous thing...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o age, young people have less chances to contact with numerous things, they also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in short, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10197368421 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02362401743 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9116006338 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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