WRITING TASK 1 TEST 6 CAM 12
WRITING TASK 1 TEST 6 CAM 12
The two Maps illustrate the differences of the center of a small town called Islip between previous and after its improvement
It's noticeable that the general structure of the center change dramatically. There will be more routes as well as service places for the residents
Look at the maps for more details. The local authorities plan to sprawl urban in the next few year, so that the area of countryside in the north of islip will be limited and replaced with a new route along. Besides, the south road is also widened,however, the main one is going to be used for only pedestrians. As you can see, a number of new buildings intend to appear in the north in the plan such as bus station, car park , as well as shopping centre, which coincides with the establishment of the new housings nearby
Some typical features of the islip town centre are kept intact namely school, 2 south residential areas. Nevertheless, three places will certainly be narrower on account of Road widening
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
WRITING TASK 1 TEST 6 CAM 12 The two Maps illustrate the differences ...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'few years'.
Suggestion: few years
...rities plan to sprawl urban in the next few year, so that the area of countryside in the...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the north of islip will be limited and replaced with a new route along. Besides...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
... Besides, the south road is also widened,however, the main one is going to be used for o...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n the plan such as bus station, car park , as well as shopping centre, which coinc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73595505618 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7696654079 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6752983595 44.8134815571 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 76.5299724578 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 16.8248392259 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 4.34317383033 295% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117438354713 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505360107417 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11300195533 0.0603063233224 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.4 0.0580467560999 689% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.