People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making
It is reasonbale to assume that what distinguishes human beings from animals is their ability to control emotions and external forces from deeply impacting their way of acting and their general way of being. Stating that a person’s behavior is, for the most part, controlled by extrinsic factors can result in being inaccurate and misleading.
Socrate is considered one of the greates philosophers of ancient Greece. His life completely revolved around finding what is true and what is not and passing this way of thinking to younger generations. His beliefs of pure rationality in the inquisition of the world led him towards the creation of a governing, abstract entity, the Demon which contrasted with the general belief of Greek Gods. For this reason, Socrate decided to commit suicide instead of live in a world where other forces impose a certain behavior on him. As every human being, he was victim of the social context in which he was born but it did not stopped him from questioning what surrounded him and the same traditions of the society in which he was living.
Going deeper into history, we find that behaviors of the kind displayed by Socrate can be also found in Rome with the figure of Seneca. Being an intellectual man and Philosopher from the current of Stoicism, he believed in a certain order of law under which the empire should be governed. With the accession of Nero to the throne, Cato saw his dreams shuttered and rather than conforming to the actual world he was living in, he decided to take his own life in order not to be slave of such condition.
On the other hand it is also true that men have the capacity to exploit extrinsic stimula and made them converge to a productive form of conduct. The same process of art production is born from inspiration which is not something that men rationally control. It is an influential force that moves your subconscious brain and connects it with the conscious part.
In conclusion, we can say that the context in which a person lives will shape his behavior but it should also be stressed that men are able to, usually control such influences, with an overall good capacity to distinguish between what is undert their control and what is not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 622, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'stop'
Suggestion: stop
...ext in which he was born but it did not stopped him from questioning what surrounded hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79220779221 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63791010877 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535064935065 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0170694119 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.785714286 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998588455833 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343358067193 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423386395214 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061420325425 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426613756526 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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